Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions.
To what extent do you agree or not?
Because of the high opportunities for reading books online on computer at a low cost, many people think that establishing public libraries is a waste of money. Although we can read books online with minimum effort, I believe that government should establish libraries and encourage the people to use it.
It is true that internet is giving us a great access to thousands of books at a minimum cost and effort while establishing libraries is costly. We can easily download soft copies of books within a few seconds while going to public libraries consumes a lot of time. Besides, people can store thousands of copies on their small computer device where these books will require a large space if we want to main physical copies. Moreover, we can share books online with our friends within seconds without losing our own copies. These facilities cannot be found in the libraries.
However, the main functions of the libraries are not just limited to providing books. Public library is a place where people of different ages and profession can get together and share their knowledge and experience with each other. As a result, not only will our knowledge increase but brotherhood among the people will also increase. Besides, in the libraries, we can found authentic copies of the original books which cannot be easily found on internet, especially in the case of free copies or cheap copies. This is helpful for those who are doing research or higher studies as they can use authentic references for their thesis or assignments.
In conclusion, the need for public libraries is inevitable though online technology can give us instant solution. This is because library is a great place to share our knowledge with different kinds of people and is a place where we can find authentic books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great access'.
Suggestion: great access
... It is true that internet is giving us a great access to thousands of books at a minimum cost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61578068343 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5921769755 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121146204682 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484293667018 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461616218998 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862617279165 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208829275353 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.