People of different ages, during the course of their life, greatly endeavore to take the greatest joy of their life in any way possible. They may intend to bring new things in their lives to feel the real meaning of the joy of life. Depending on the age on which different category of peole stand, young people could obviously enjoy their life different from the old generation. The situation will be elaborated as below.
First of all, young people are capable of higher potential to try or to do new things - that can lead to an enjoyable moment in life. For instance, a newly married couple is more likely to follow each other's demands and necessities in order to have done somehting leading to their happiness and joy of their life. Old people, by contrast, may not be capable of the high enthusiasm they used to have as new couples.
Secondly, the unquenchable fire and interest of curiosity which ignites the young people to dare to examine every new event in life, can precisely add to the joy of life. For example, young peole are more likely to be outgoig and spent much time being with friends and acquaintances. Old people, however, are clearly not as quite tolerant to do such activities, as young people are.
Third, old generation would not stand more tolerance to set high goals in their lives anymore, as they suspect they have reached to a considerable level of life where there is no more room for setting goal. Young people, on the contrary, appreciate pursuing and risking every new phenomenon in their life, as they will sometimes give themselves positive reinforcement through positive thinking in order not to give up.
At the end, people of young age are more likely to appreciate the chances in their lives and take greater advantage of the joys of life in comparison to other people of old ages.
People of different ages, during the course of their life, greatly endeavore to take the greatest joy of their life in any way possible. They may intend to bring new things in their lives to feel the real meaning of the joy of life. Depending on the age on which different category of peole stand, young people could obviously enjoy their life different from the old generation. The situation will be elaborated as below.
First of all, young people are capable of higher potential to try or to do new things - that can lead to an enjoyable moment in life. For instance, a newly married couple is more likely to follow each other's demands and necessities in order to have done somehting leading to their happiness and joy of their life. Old people, by contrast, may not be capable of the high enthusiasm they used to have as new couples.
Secondly, the unquenchable fire and interest of curiosity which ignites the young people to dare to examine every new event in life, can precisely add to the joy of life. For example, young peole are more likely to be outgoig and spent much time being with friends and acquaintances. Old people, however, are clearly not as quite tolerant to do such activities, as young people are.
Third, old generation would not stand more tolerance to set high goals in their lives anymore, as they suspect they have reached to a considerable level of life where there is no more room for setting goal. Young people, on the contrary, appreciate pursuing and risking every new phenomenon in their life, as they will sometimes give themselves positive reinforcement through positive thinking in order not to give up.
At the end, people of young age are more likely to appreciate the chances in their lives and take greater advantage of the joys of life in comparison to other people of old ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
People of different ages, during the course of their life, greatly endeavore to take t...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Depending on the age on which different category of peole stand, young people co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50841552329 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3326388259 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548713303648 0.236089414692 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215329528163 0.076458572812 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223659046056 0.0737576698707 303% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327614115293 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243419920186 0.0645574589148 377% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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