Recent research shows that the consumption of junk food is a major factor in poor diet and this is detrimental to health. Some people believe that better health education is the answer to this problem but others disagree. What is your opinion?
It goes without saying that junk food become popular all around the world. It is cause of a lot of health problems. Some may believes that by improving health education can solve it but other disagree. I completely agree with the idea that improving relevant education is a solution.
There are several reasons why junk food is unhealthy and harmful. Firstly, human body is so complicated and there are a lot of essential things need every day such as vitamins, proteins, minerals, etc. However, junk food has a low nutritional value, so it does not provide body daily needs. Secondly, it includes a lot of substances used to preserve it against decay for a long time while those materials are so injurious and one of the reasons of cancer. Finally, it is high in calories, thus it is caused of obesity and illness. Hyperlipidemia, hypertension, diabetes, and fatty liver are some diseases due to overweight.
I believe that superior health education is one of ways for solving that problem. Actually many people do not know harms of processed food for their bodies, therefore this education help them to know better their physical structures and their needs. As I mentioned, that kind of food is the cause of a series of illnesses, hence they can avoid them. Being aware is efficient way to improve their lives as well as choose a healthy diet along with as a consequence healthy life.
In conclusion, my view is that people should increase their knowledge about what do they eat and what are they made of that help them to have a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77407407407 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6472674008 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6138272448 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222799190572 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691984261889 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696519315607 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125067394165 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641965728963 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.