Charts 1 and 2 below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by young people in Canada and Poland. Chart 3 shows the average age of certain life events for these countries and an estimated global average age.
Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The charts show the percentage of youth income spent on various areas in Poland and Canada, and also three key life events by age compared to an estimated global norm.
Looking firstly at income, we see that in Canada the 2 highest areas of expense are leisure and
clothing, at 20% and 19% respectively. The other areas (housing, food, transport and studies) are all roughly similar, at between 14% to 16%.
In Poland, however, studies take almost half the expenditure at 43%, followed by transport at 26%. Leisure and clothing are similar at 10% and 11%, and housing/food are the same at 5%.
Regarding life events, we see that, in Poland, leaving home and buying a car happen at an age close to the predicted global norm of around 26 years, whereas in Canada they happen much earlier at 20 years or just under. Getting married, by contrast, is similar in both countries at around 30 years, which is much later than the world average of just over 20.
In summary, young people’s expenditure in Canada is more evenly split than Poland, where
transport and studies take the vast majority. Poland is closer to the global average than Canada in terms of life events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e than Canada in terms of life events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, whereas, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77941176471 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44824847748 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4973492274 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23460192308 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105358918069 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12120140187 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123448887511 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125229140253 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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