You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
- Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Minh,
Sorry mate for late response due to a super busy week. I hope this reply letter answer your consideration for continuing the academic path or trying to get a job. I sincerely would advise you to seek an employment.
Having known you for years, I frankly believe you will not be energetic in academic and theoretical knowledge imparted in college. Besides, the tuition could be your financial burden during the years of studying.
On the other hand, you are very talented at game coding. I witnessed you spent whole weekend creating promptly a fantastic online game for a competition. With high demand in game developers, you should pursue your passion and use the skills to end up in a coveted job.
Finally, I suggest you apply for job in one of outstanding technology companies that have wonderful training program to elevate your career path. Then, you could significantly contribute to their success and development with your skills.
If you need further discussion, don’t hesitate to contact me. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Son
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| 2019-08-06 | Gunjan Pratap | 78 | view |
| 2018-10-02 | nazirsumra | 75 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, frankly, if, look, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08938547486 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75631384333 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720670391061 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4934780241 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0769230769 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234794559071 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746152561148 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058218105856 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12284924927 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049353138645 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.