Task 2: many museums charge for admission while others are free
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweight the disadvantages
It is a controversial matter as to whether or not museums should charge people with entrance fees. While this would definitely entail a number of benefits, I would argue that admission fees do more harm than good.
To begin with, there are several good points pertaining to maintaining admission fees in museums. One obvious advantage is that charging visitors with admission could help improve the budgets of museums. The fact of the matter is that organizing museums requires a considerable amount of money for maintenance purposes, security, sanitation fee as well as utility bills. Therefore, under some circumstances, money collected from visitors ensures that museums operate on a continuing basis. Another advantage is for museums to reduce the amount of visitors. In the context that some museums are facing a problem while the number of people visiting these museums a day is higher than their capabilities, some kinds of admission charges would be a simple solution.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, I believe that the drawbacks of entrance fees are greater. The main downside of methods such as entrance tickets is that they impede the chance of visiting museums and acquiring knowledge of those with pecuniary difficulties, especially students and poor people. For example, my sister, who is an overseas student in China, is encountering some adversities while doing a thesis on the history of Beijing as she cannot afford the increasing research expense due to rising entrance fee policies of some local museums. It would be wrong as knowledge of history and culture offered by museums should be made available to anyone, irrespective of social status and financial condition.
In conclusion, while I acknowledge the benefits that admission charges of museums might bring, I firmly hold the opinion that the disadvantages resulted are more significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37288135593 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92936278592 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0560717125 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324362501622 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115163008045 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804104917518 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206009752844 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905027747738 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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