Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to university but who cannot afford the tuition.
As our society becomes more developed, people are worrying about whether the social hierarchical system becomes increasingly consolidated. In some developing countries, young people are less willing to have babies, which truly reflects their worries that the poverty will be passed on to the next generation. It goes without doubt that education is one the best tool to prevent a rigid social system.
It is true that more people will have the chance to become educated if the government were able to pay for the education expenses for students who cannot afford the tuition. As a consequence, we should expect more liquidity in the society. Education will provide a means for people to enter a higher class in the society. However, anything comes with a cost. If everyone could enter university free of cost, universities are expected to admit more students each year, and the quality of education will deteriorate as a result. Some classes, which are designed for a relatively smaller group of students, will be overcrowded. When we try to partition the limited education resources to a much larger group of students, each one of them will not be fully equipped. Take a university level biology class as an example, lectures are often complemented by lab sessions. Each of the lab, however, are limited in spaces and equipment. If we expect doubled students in the university registered for those courses, it will be highly likely that they will no longer be able to provide lab sessions for each of the students.
Instead of asking the government to fully sponsor each students who cannot afford the cost of education, a compromised plan could be proposed. Government supports could come in different forms, and offering free admission is only one of them. For instance, scholarships and government loans can be offered to those students who emerge from poverty. In terms of student work opportunities, some universities also give poor students priorities. Students who received help through these channels, are also stimulated to work much harder.
Education should not be conceived as “free lunch” but a cherished opportunity. Ideally, everyone should be given equal opportunity for receiving education. However, it will be too much of an idealism to expect this to be true in the real world. Having the government offering free education to all students is certainly not the best way. After all, the main responsibility of the government is to take actions that benefit the society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, after all, for instance, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14390243902 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87105495828 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0354525696 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6956521739 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8260869565 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297875029741 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828668875922 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842120565466 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172670450688 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112874822757 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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