Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Art has played a vital role in enriching cultures all over the world. However, due to better job prospect and ability to lead a good quality of life people are now showing more interest in science and technology, but measures such as the introduction of arts related subjects during the primary education and development of apps can be taken to create interest among people towards arts.
One of the primary reason for people to turn their interest in science and technology is better job opportunities. This is because in most of the fields those individuals, who are well versed with the technology, are in demand and have a better chance to secure a high paying job. Only in the United States, for example, every year more than 75000 people are required having skills in writing computer software. Moreover, people who are proficient in technology usage can increase their business reach globally. They use e-commerce platforms to sell their products and services globally and increase their revenue by multi-fold. The recent study by Harvard University revealed that 70% of the small and medium enterprises use the technology platforms to increase their reach globally and earn more profit.
However, art is an unavoidable aspect of everyday life and cannot be ignored. There are numerous measures that can be taken to create interest among young generation. Firstly, subjects related to music or dancing should be introduced in the schools and their importance should be taught. This can also be done with the help of experiment where students are engaged in a science task that requires attention and lots of calculations to solve a complex problem. After that, they should be given a chance to play music to relax. This will help them to realize the value of art. Also, mobile applications can be developed which simulate the experience of playing a musical instrument to demonstrate that playing it helps to release the everyday stress.
In conclusion, due to better career opportunity and ability to expand business, the importance of art is getting faded. However, measures can be taken to create and maintain interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70074970695 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545714285714 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5994571983 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192997790395 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658100742825 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426551543525 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118654648032 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232071515512 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.