Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it is better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?
It is sometimes argued that the government is in charge of facilitating its citizens with free medical services. Nonetheless, I thoroughly agree with the idea that this the budget ought to be allocated to enhancing the level of culture and education in the society.
The most striking point to be mentioned is that supporting both educational and cultural programs, governments enable people to lessen the risk of developing diseases. In fact, as long as the merits of following a healthy lifestyle are introduced to individuals, they are less likely to expose themselves to health-threatening conditions. Take a host of patients suffering from lung cancers as an example, if they had been aware of the debilitating consequences of smoking cigarette, they would have abandoned it before getting attached to this fatal product. In addition, the more people are informed about their responsibility of protecting environment, the less they pollute their living area, which leads to devastating ailments for either humankind or other creatures.
Another equally noteworthy point is that apart from the prominent role that cultural and educational prioritizing plays in prevention of ailments, it can benefit governments in terms of economic issues. Rarely does the money spent on free healthcare return to economic cycle, whereas the funds dedicated to fostering mindful, responsible, job-qualified citizens will be assuredly regenerated through their contribution to the society. A huge number of people struggling with poverty fail to prevent contracting infectious disease owing to lack of education. This problem imposes multiple expenses on the government; Therefore, I suggest that the government devote more money to nurturing citizens who are not only financially empowered to afford their own health services but also motivated to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, all the aforementioned ideas endorse the fact that although governments serve a limited number of people by undertaking healthcare expenses, I believe that if the money assigned to educational and cultural purposes, people will take wider range of advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63888888889 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19318278896 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2433829633 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.090909091 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154657829996 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558544551812 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380106058514 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925129001045 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016349110914 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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