People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life.
What are the most significant of these problems?
How can these problems be tackled?
There is a debate about the challenges for the people that live in large cities. Actually there is a range of issues and among them, there are two I consider that more influence the life quality. This problems will be tackled during this essay and a solution will be given in the end in order to help to people that deal with this kind of problems.
In my point of view, the first and most important problem is the time lost in traffic. There is a huge difference comparing the life in large cities and the country or small town lives. The average of time lost in traffic for some people from New York is estimated in 4 hours and people can loose about 1/5 of their lives in traffic, as was reported in a BBC documentary.
Another problems brought by big industrial complex is the pollution. The quality of the air impact straight on the life quality. National Geography made a series to show how the pollution can interfering the quality lives and they present some researchs that proved the life can be reduced in average 3 years, caused by 10 kinds of diseases.
In a conclusion, people who live in big cities need to face this problems daily and they always keep looking for a solution or a better way to deal with this problems. A big moviment called FITW is the begin and it was created in other to motivate people to change the the way of locomotion, once changing car by bikes or public transports we can reduce the pollution and time lost in traffic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46096654275 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3999442603 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6060768282 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315487911179 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10521303523 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465191293431 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17735141769 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125571146616 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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