A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum before going to college.
Students should not be forced to study anything that is not of their interest. Instead, students should be encouraged to study in their field of interest.
Students have their own field of interest and they are more likely to succeed in the field that they like than the field they are forced onto. For example, if a particular student is good at Chemistry and he is forced by the curriculum to study History as well, it is not going to benefit him and he may end up scoring less in History and hence affecting his overall GPA.
Students forced to study the subjects out of their interests can affect the students financially as they will be spending money for the books and other accecesories required to study that subject. In addition to that, students will waste their time as well. For example, if a student having interest in History is forced to study Computer related subjects, he will not only end up wasting the time which he could have used towards History, but he will have to spend a lot of money on the computer as well. This can affect the future of such students in many ways.
Although it is possible that some students aren't clear as to what they want to study or what field interests them. For such students, studying the same curriculum all over the nation may help the on deciding what interests them. However, this criteria alone is not sufficient for a nation to force students to study same curriculum all the country.
A nation should keep in mind all the above effects that can be caused due to their decision of same national curriculum. Student's future should not be compromised at any cost and hence curriculum should be planned accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: studying
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Suggestion: aren't
...hough it is possible that some students arent clear as to what they want to study or ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... deciding what interests them. However, this criteria alone is not sufficient for a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68581081081 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44041249178 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456081081081 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9528946446 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316582376418 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141291219592 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100393340765 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197838276994 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963269471354 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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