The expression “Never,never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals . Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
Has anyone told you to give up? That you’re wasting too much time on it that you should work on something else and just give up?Yes? Well ,reply them with the expression “Never , Never give up.” When you’re passionate about your own goals, you will never give up, you will keep trying, trying, and trying till you succeed.
First up , how do you know how things will turn out to be if you never bothered to try and struggle till the end of it? Thomas Edison failed at least a thousand times in the process of making a lightbulb yet he never gave up ! Let me give you an example, you love watching celebrities dancing videos and you want to learn to dance too. However you believe you don’t have any “dancing genes” and gives up the idea of dancing before trying it at all. I believe there are no such things as “ dancing genes” you create your own “dancing genes” by practising practising and practicing. You won’t improve your skills in a day but through constant practice your skills will gradually improves. While you’re practicing its for sure that you will encounter failures but that is the time to show your strength and perseverance for dancing.If you manage to stand up again , that is what makes you stand out from others. You learn from your failures and keep trying. One day you will be one of the celebrities in the videos you once watched! Imagine you just gave up at the very beginning, you’re not only giving up your own goals but you’re also throwing away your life opportunity of being a dancer !
In addition, the spirit of never giving up can help you become a more determined ,goal-oriented person, and of course keeps you motivated . People would say: This is just a useless expression to encourage people when they are down or discourage why are you all bothered ? But NO this is more than an expression, it can be a part of a person’s moral. As you grow up , you will understand no one can get anything by just ordering it , you’ll have to work for it and not to take anything for granted . By a few trials and errors you’ll know that if you want to attain or achieve your goals you’ll have to hustle harder and trying there’s no secret path for you to reach your goal faster. This can help you develop as a person , you will be a more humble person, willing to learn and try new things or even new challenges .
Furthermore if you never try you might even miss a once-in-a-life opportunity, if you never bothered to try and see what happens you might never get to try it again in your remaining years . And you’ll be drowned in misery and regret. Does that not appeal to you? That is why I consider “never , never give up ‘ one of the best expressions I’ve ever learned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, at least, in addition, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68282828283 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7218435135 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482828282828 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.07551401 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417486314941 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17343594386 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869701514758 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338611598275 0.150856017488 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343542342315 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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