TPO 47

Essay topics:

TPO 47

By world quick changes, people have access to many different sources of information. Most of ‎people ‎thinks that they have to read all news out there and get informed by any means. In my ‎opinion, it is ‎important to just select news that really is related to you, otherwise you may encounter ‎with ‎inconvenience trouble. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.‎
First of all, having great amount of news about whatever is happening around the world is time-‎‎consuming. To be more specific, you must allocate specific times for reading news and analyzing ‎of ‎those which is unlikely to be helpful in life. Therefore, it would cause waste of time because you ‎can ‎use your time in order to learn something new that will be useful in near future. My ‎brother's ‎experience is a compelling example of this. When he was in college, he was really eager to ‎follow what ‎is going around the world. He used to keep tracking all websites and internet sources that ‎they doesn't ‎even any relation with his major or life. This took about five hours of his golden ‎moments. So, he ‎wasn't able to focus on his education materials so that he was miles away from his ‎classes. As a result, ‎he failed first semester and he couldn't be successful on that period of time. ‎Although he was in the ‎horrible situation, he discerned that nothing is more valuable than his ‎dedication time to his education ‎and his unhelpful tracking news was a big mistake.‎
Second, among what websites and news agencies publish, there is lot of fake news. In others ‎words, ‎there are lots of biased news publisher and media which are main lead of partial information in ‎the ‎society because they are more eager to support their side instead of caring to provide accurate ‎news ‎for people. By looking for this kind of news, it is possible that you face bad consequences and it ‎bring ‎about misleading of people. My own story illustrates this is concept. Two years ago, I pursue ‎seriously ‎political and economic news through internet so that I can productively invest in stock ‎market. ‎Consequently, I get familiar with a website that gives wrong signal regarding market condition ‎or even ‎it delayed news. I trusted that reports and put huge money in inappropriate shares. Finally, I ‎lost my ‎whole money this way. As you can see, unpleasant events might be caused by this untruthful ‎data.‎
In conclusion, I strongly believe that following everything that leaks in to the news centers is ‎not ‎logical. Not only can it be wast of time and a barrier to suitable activities, but also it can provide ‎misunderstanig and misconception. I personally just follow what excatly is my need to be informed ‎ablout and avoid looking for a bunch of invalid data.‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ld quick changes, people have access to many different sources of information. Most of ‎people...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ebsites and internet sources that ‎they doesnt ‎even any relation with his major or li...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 711, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...e hours of his golden ‎moments. So, he ‎wasnt able to focus on his education material...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 849, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...esult, ‎he failed first semester and he couldnt be successful on that period of time. ‎...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 879, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...er and he couldnt be successful on that period of time. ‎Although he was in the ‎horrible situ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, look, may, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05042016807 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99144025179 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590336134454 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9678711662 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.52173913 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6956521739 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73913043478 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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