people nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the olden days.discuss the causes for this situation and suggest some possible solutions.

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people nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the olden days.discuss the causes for this situation and suggest some possible solutions.

nowadays ,people have an adverse effect on their health.Above all,masses have become more obese and have gained a lot of gastrointestinal problems due to which they are unable to do heavy handwork. Moreover, now innate energy of every being dwindled because of which they much lower potential and readily get exhausted even by doing small tasks. Apart from this,due to technology advancement pollution is increasing day by daywhich causes respiratory and cardiovascular issues in our body. Modern lifestyle is the main reason of unhealthyness.in past people had lack of amenities owing to which they did lot of work hard and this manual workout kept them fit and fine .besides this,in these days inhabitants eat ready made food and aerated drinks those have abundant of fat ,preservatives and co2 ,hence all these act as hazards for human body .furthermore

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 138.0 315.596192385 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21014492754 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97441480921 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.811594202899 0.561755894193 144% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3365236214 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.75 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127757138758 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644615989122 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039661007301 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127757138758 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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