The graph below shows the change in the proportion of GDP in three areas in a particular country between 2000 and 2020.
Given is the graph illustrating the modification of the GDP index in three main areas of a country from 2000 to 2020.
It is clear that the percentage of GDP in health has the inclination to increase even in the foreseeable future. Meanwhile, transportation is subject to overall volatility.
Standing at 3% in 2000, the figure for GDP in health is predicted to jump further to 8% in 2020. At the same time, although education had a high percentage at the first point at 5% and accelerate slightly to 6% in 2005, it is expected to suddenly decrease steadily to 4% in 2020.
Transportation is the figure which has dramatic change during the research time; having the same proportion of GDP as health, it fluctuated during 10 years and followed by a growth pattern that was more varied, it will be at nearly 4% in 2020.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 683.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67808219178 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90431150758 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5844222736 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243558696118 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118163826356 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123570672716 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1543726627 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128264433407 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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