Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city.
Which place would you prefer to live in? use specific reasons and details to support you answer.
Indonesia has many island which can we live in it. We can live in anywhere the only place that provides life. We are living in big cities and small towns, both have their own advantages and disadvantages. While some people like to live in a metropolitan big city, but my personal perspective I prefer to live in a quiet comfortable small town. Small towns have an easy access to anywhere, so I can go easy wherever I want.
Firstly, small towns have an easy access to all of their place, it is because we have little distances to get to anyplace. This is important to me since there are some b...
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Indonesia has many island which can we live in it.
Indonesia has many islands where we live in.
Countryside not have pollution
Countryside does not have pollution
small towns are some conviction
small towns have some convictions
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 348 350
No. of Characters: 1600 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.319 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.598 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.447 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.271 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.535 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.156 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5