You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Thank you friend for the holiday
2. Explain that you left your wallet in their house
3. give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Johnny,
It was a great pleasure to spend holiday at your place. Thanks for your efforts and time to host us. I’m glad to invite you to come over my house on upcoming holiday.
Anyway, did you notice my wallet in your home? Actually, my wallet have been left at your accommodation and this was being noticed when I got back to my home. I suppose that I may accidentally drop it in the bathroom after taking shower. However, please help me to have a look for it in your place.
If you manage to find the wallet, you can send it directly to my home from the post. My home address is 121, 41st Street, Botahtaung Township, Yangon. I believe that the postage cost will be around 1.2$ - 2$ which will be refunded when we meet again.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you and hope you can find my wallet.
Yours Friend,
Yan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
... that the postage cost will be around 1.2$ - 2$ which will be refunded when we mee...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
... the postage cost will be around 1.2$ - 2$ which will be refunded when we meet aga...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...will be refunded when we meet again. Im looking forward to hearing from you and...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, however, if, look, may, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4358974359 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24574462024 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8413448073 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.6666666667 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401632090615 0.216113520407 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150947067776 0.0766984524023 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106549485001 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229763981801 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447453382429 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.