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TOPIC# SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO EAT AT FOOD STANDS OR RESTAURANTS. OTHER PEOPLE PREFER TO PREPARE AND EAT FOOD AT HOME. WHICH ONE DO YOU PREFER?
Nowadays, the pressure of modern lifestyle has compelled people to eat more at restaurants and food stands in order to spend less time on cooking. Eating at food stands is convenient and timesaving; however, it has some disadvantages that outweigh these benefits. I personally prefer to eat at home for two main reasons. First, it is much healthier to eat at home. Second, it is cheaper than eating out. For these reasons, I would rather to eat at home.
To begin with, as far as I am concerned, the food prepared at home is healthier and more nutritious than fast foods served at stands. At home, ...
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Sentence: For example, last time I ate at a restaurant, it cost me twenty dollars.
Description: The word cost is not usually used as a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to cost
flaws:
Don't need to list reasons in the introduction paragraph. This will create some duplicate words and sentences.
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Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 393 350
No. of Characters: 1815 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.452 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.618 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.555 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.886 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5