Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome curtural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people like to migrate from their country to other countries for improving quality of their lives. Many people trust that visitors should follow citizen’s customs and behavior. However, in my opinion, dwellers of visited country should accept the differences of culture between them.
Some people argue that visitors should do what citizens usually do and wear everything what citizens wear in spite of different with their cultures. Following native behavior makes immigrant adapting easily with the condition and society in the country. For example, indigenous people always wear thi...
- The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their chil 70
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 80
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 65
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