Nowadays, culture is more or less the same around the world as compare in the past. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Due to advancement of technology, the cultures of all nations have influenced in last few decades. However, the young people have enthusiasm to follow the other country's culture and tradition. Thus, some aspects have changed in culture, as compare to the past time. In this essay I will discuss positive and negative aspects of exchanged culture.
To begin with, the main positive aspect of exchanged culture is the flexibility and popularity of particular tradition. For instance, nowadays, in INDIA, majority of people especially youngster have influenced by western culture. This could be happened by digital telecommunication, instant messaging that provides a platform to the user to make friends around the world and know about art, music, dressing. As in the past people have not any medium to acquire information around nations. Secondly, the strong relationship and mutual understanding will happen only with the help of cultural understanding. This approach will intensify the cultural and language exchange programs among countries.
On the other hand, the one of the primary drawback of modern cultural exchange is conflicts and misunderstanding among older generation and new generation. The transmitting of ritual, religion, clothing and music can lead to misunderstanding among the society. For example, in some nations, people do not want any interface within their culture and living. Hence, the acceptance of other culture may cause of disturbance in community. Furthermore, the one particular culture is being preferred globally by individuals. Thus, the other cultures are endangering. Lastly, the artwork skills will be endangered also because if the local community are not attracting to purchase home- made goods.
To sum up, no doubt, there are lots of universal cultures which have similarity of such as cooking, dance, art and architecture. However, some other aspects like use of technology and invention can upgrade the lifestyle of a particular tribe. Lastly, in the immemorial time, the cultural enlargement was limited. Now, the human beings have freedom to follow the various cultural trends.
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Suggestion: pastime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53374233129 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05143654827 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3102625878 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9047619048 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204915188835 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590483778927 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393480894591 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123642067415 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569190434107 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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