Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am Renuka, currently, I reside in Gandhipuram, T.Nagar, Chennai. I am writing this letter on behalf of Gandhipuram residence community. My workplace is on ECR road and I take public transport for everyday commutation. During the weekdays I need to wait for more than thirty minutes for boarding the bus number 57 in both morning and evening timings.
I realised that there are many schools and colleges in the route I am travelling. Due to which the bus is always crowded. Most of the days, the bus driver skip my stop since the bus is already full. I have also seen many schools and college students tries to run and board the bus when the bus is moving, which is very dangerous. I also noted an important root cause for this, from morning 7:30 to 10:00 total number of buses for the problematic route is just 5. This translated to one bus every half an hour.
To overcome this problem, I would plead you to increase the frequency of the bus during the morning and evening peak hours, which is 7:30 AM to 10:00 AM for morning and 5:00 PM to 7:00 PM in the evening. Do give strict orders to bus drivers to halt the bus in each bus stop even though the bus is full, with this tactic we can reduce the student boarding the moving vehicle. Hope you will consider my petition and implement it for well being of citizens.
Thanks & Regards
Renuka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nagar
..., currently, I reside in Gandhipuram, T.Nagar, Chennai. I am writing this letter on b...
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Line 6, column 186, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'PM'.
Suggestion: PM
...0:00 AM for morning and 5:00 PM to 7:00 PM in the evening. Do give strict orders to bus drivers t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49397590361 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40182930284 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.863042668 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9285714286 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120610436465 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039038595761 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368528774832 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823804626763 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403240197819 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.