Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business?
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in arts?
Art is, without doubt, contemplate to be the mirror of society which represents the culture. Now, a leading problem is raised, that interest of people towards the art is declining day by day, because of science, technology and business. Here, I, would like to account for the motive behind this as well as remedies to tackle this happening.
There are numerous reasons of this worrying concern. First and the most important reason is, lack of employment or job opportunities, the demand of arts as profession is negligible. To illustrate, it is a fact, art play a crucial role in society anyhow people spend lot of money and precious time to make their profession in art. Inspite of getting a low salary job, they are not getting a job even which make hard for them to fulfill their fundamental needs. Thence, people considered art as a wastage of time and money. Besides this, in this modern era, the demand of technology, science and business is everywhere in the world. To elaborate, a recent survey by business magazine concluded that almost 60% businesses are running with the help of modern machinery, computers and other things related to technology. Ultimately, it increase the importance of science and technology as well as CA (charter accountant) which is related to business field is extremely lucrative to show the path of betterment to a company. Therefore, people are losing their curiosity in art.
Now, major judicious measures to be taken to address this alarming problem. To begin with, governing authorities should provide employment opportunities in the field of art. To demonstrate, if their is job than their is demand. So, it is must to provide job in art, if authorities want to change the mind of people towards it. Apart from it, seminars should be arranged in the presence of famous celebrities which make people more eager to show thier talent of art, in the front of their role model. Hence, it assist them to grow the curiosity of people. At last, the earlier it is possible, the better it will be.
In conclusion, after having all points into my knowledge, I, would like reiterate that supreme power of a nation should provide all the possible solutions which are mentioned above. If authorities want to eradicate this problem from the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93766233766 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74256688744 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54025974026 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8246987869 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207123065547 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624163541102 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507326165386 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120405993195 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431203092068 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.