Should children grow up in the countryside or in a city?
There is no shortage of debate that where the young adult should colonize. Although it is not an ideal for everyone, some people believe that teenagers has to stay in country side to learn the tradition of their community and others believe that they need to stay urban areas for better facilities. Personally, I feel that youngster should stay in cities. I feel this way that for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, towns are the best place for kids to gain knowledge. If the kids are staying in the urban areas, they have enough institution to study within the short distance. On the top of that, they have a chance to visit museum, libraries to double their knowledge. For example, when I was studying high school, my family was moved to Taxes from the near rural area for my studies. I got the admission in one of the well reputed school. On top of that, I got an opportunity to visit world famous army museum and I learned a lot of new things about American Army functions.
Second, if the adolescents are staying in cities they has a huge opportunity improved diversity while meeting a variety of people. Generally, different kind of the people migrate to the cities from surrounding areas for the better life style, which leads to diversity in the cities. When I was studying my schoolings at Findlay high school, I met different students from all over the world and I had a great time with them because we mutually share our cultures and traditions. Particularly, one friend from India thought me their language, which was really fun and memorable.
In conclusion, living at towns was really a great opportunity for students to explore the world. The cities had a great diversity in people taught new lesions from them and also it have a variety of choice in every sector unlike rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, so, well, while, as for, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69875776398 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53470376916 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537267080745 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7673764498 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0507862093126 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209338706113 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323057068797 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341333427619 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203976889833 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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