the line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The line graph depicts the number of visitors in millions from the UK who went abroad and those who came to UK between 1979 to 1999, while bar graph illustrate the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The most striking feature to be observed is that, from 1979 to 1984, the visitors who went abroad was 20 millions. After that it followed an increasing trend rising from 55 millions in 1999.The visitors who came UK was 11 millions and elevated slightly and reached at 25 millions in 1999.
Turning to rest of description, in 1999,France led with highest 10 millions of UK visitors whereas Spain, USA, and Greece occupied second third and fourth position with 9,6 and 5 millions of UK visitors respectively . Turkey stood at lowest position .As far as comparison is concerned the visitors who visit UK was more compare to UK visitors who visit in other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: 5 million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81045751634 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59187723994 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.6615682998 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.2 76.5299724578 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373272026705 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214375462124 0.0766984524023 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177801159977 0.0603063233224 295% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302321780872 0.12726935374 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187427454334 0.0580467560999 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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