Some people think that cars is the best wat to tavel in cities while others believe a bicycle is better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Certainly in this 21st century many people prefer to use appropriate vehicle to accelerate activities. Therefore, cars considered as best way to support their movement. In my perspective, using bike is better alternative due to health and environmental reason.
Many people have own reasons why people prefer cars over bicycles to commute from one to another place. As the main background, urban society finds cars as the most effective transportation to support their mobility due to their high rate activities. To illustrate, many workers in big city rush off to arrive at the work place. However, they can minimize the traveling period using cars. It seems to me that cars are the most time-saving mode of transport and suitable for city citizen.
On the other hand, riding bicycle is good choice for health and beneficial for environment issues. These days, people are more concern about their health. Therefore, cycling helps to burn extra calories and prevents cardiovascular disease. Since people in city do not have time for exercise, it is better to use bike as a transportation mode, yet they work out at the same time. The other reason, it is environmentally friendly since a bike does not run any harmful gases which damage the ozone layer. If people in downtown begin cycling to their work instead of driving private car, it would beneficial to prevent the air from pollution and the city temperature resulting a slight drop in the future.
From my point or view, it is true that cars have benefits for the user. However, the increase of cycle user can give great impact for both environment and healthier lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02573529412 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76859228952 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7992994869 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181531425946 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561870251938 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371751801455 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108382548825 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00795479333637 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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