Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How it has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages of relying too much on it.
Over the years, technology is considered a predominant factor. Recent technology is used customarily at workplaces for various reasons and one of the prime reason behind it is development compared to the other countries. Due to the competitive globalization, the way we work has been changed drastically which I will be demonstrating further. Apart from that, because of the technological dependency there have been detrimental effects on everyone.
In the past, we used to work manually, without any intervension of machines. However, nowadays each and every company has machines implemented for all the activities.
The usage of the computers not only provided ease of use but also has made the work efficient and quick. Robotics, with the help of new technology, has become the powerful source for several firms which in turn decreased the human involvement in the production factories. For instance, machines learning and robotics together had been working since long and now the results are really overwhelming in all the industries.
With the advent of the technology, even though our approach towards the work has been changed but it also has lead to some disadvantages. Usage of the machines beyond the certain limit absolutely increased the dependency on them. The prime disadvantage is decreased physical activities of the people working in front of laptops which causes diseases and other health issues. Unlimited involvement of the technology in the various departments of the firms elevates the unemployment ratio. For Instance, previously if hundred people were working in the quality check of clothes, due to automatic programs only a few of them required to take care of the types of machinery
In conclusion, even if the modern technology has improved our lives dramatically and made it easy than before, however, the overuse of the same made deteriorate effect on individuals. This definitely can be controlled by understanding the positive and negative aspects of the technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3949044586 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07145091158 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2849330996 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194316456778 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602539920692 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452736123277 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995747342767 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401865156065 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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