There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...........,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about the inconvenience caused due to the irregularity in regard to bus service, in my locality over the past two weeks.
I am a regular traveler on BEST bus No. 422 which en route Marol Depot towards Bandra. I am a disciplinarian and have been promptly following the bus schedule on your website. My daily ride at 7:22 am is repeated delayed, and has created a disruption in my routine.
Relying on services has lead to break my unblemished punctuality record in my professional career. I'm very disappointed with the inefficient and unpredictability of your services. The timetable isn't updated regularly and I assume that a new driver has been appointed for the morning shift.
I request you to kindly alter the route or address the matter at concern with the driver, I am certain, that it is not just me alone who is affected but the delayed commute. I expect you to be more prompt with your online services and keep the bus status updated, to least, maintain the quality of the service promised.
Yours sincerely,
Khushleen Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...my locality over the past two weeks. I am a regular traveler on BEST bus No. ...
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...created a disruption in my routine. Relying on services has lead to break my...
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...ality record in my professional career. Im very disappointed with the inefficient ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80748663102 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90235930815 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3396826958 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168982908934 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687626120883 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580349293484 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095714397926 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268097146642 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.