In today's world, different government and international organizations are confronting many gobal problems. What is the most pressing problem among them and give solution?
Our planet has overcome many struggles to reach its form today. Those struggles were dated even before the history of mankind started. We even began to think that we are going through a peaceful era, but actually, it is not. One of the deadliest wars our planet is fighting now is global warming and rising climatic changes.
Global warming is the phenomena of a gradual rise in the world's temperature. This happens due to a multitude of factors. One such factor is the ozone layer depletion. The ozone layer, which protects the atmosphere from harmful sun rays, are gradually depleting due to heavy use of fossil fuels and some chemicals we use in refrigerators and air conditioners. Another important factor which accelerates global warming is CO2 emissions. These two accounts 90% cause for global warming and this, in turn, causes the rise in temperature which results in major climate changes across the world. Such instances can be found in recent Tsunami in Japan, the increasing number of cyclones hitting different parts of the world etc.
Out of many solutions to stop this horror, the major thing which we need to do now is to control our use of fossil fuels. We should act immediately to stop fuels like Diesel and Kerosine and plan on stopping the use of Petrol gradually. The only option for a good tomorrow is using green fuels like helium, hydrogen or at least electricity. We should also plan on using more eco-friendly refrigerants on our air conditioners and coolers.
In conclusion, global warming is the major issue we are facing now and we should act immediately to stop it from getting us any further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... the phenomena of a gradual rise in the worlds temperature. This happens due to a mult...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89208633094 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64601538983 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7134908656 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0472668934748 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0172000054594 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277018047843 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0253171720973 0.151781067708 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159133301033 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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