People should work in what they love. In terms of conditions in work, some people prefer to work developing the same activity every day while other consider that having different activities daily is more advantageous. Both have positive and negative aspects. However, I personally believe that having a job in which workers may have different duties is the best option. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, developing unexpected tasks every day may provide people with a vast amount of knowledge because they can learn by trial and error. By doing this, people will not only more experienced but also enhance their performance at work. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I used to work in my uncle’s company at the beginning I used to do similar tasks which made me feel bored and uncomfortable and therefore my performance was questioned by some co-workers. Nevertheless, this reality changed when my uncle changed my role in the company. Every day, I did not know what to expect during the day because I started to develop numerous duties within the company; sometimes I worked in an office and others days I had to work outside. Having changed my agenda of activities, I began to feel more motivated for doing these activities and consequently, my performance was improved significantly.
Secondly, another aspect of working is that people have to enjoy all the activities they do. Breaking the routine may provide people with more challenges which involve that people will give their best efforts for achieving these goals. As I said above, when I started in my second job, the first requirement I asked my boss was to let me decide the way in which I could develop the activities that he gave me. Having accepted this suggestion, I was able to create new methods for accomplishing the required tasks which imply that my boss was satisfied with my performance despite being unconfidence in the beginning. In the same way, I did not only break my routine but also succeed with the activities required. As a result, I did not consider my job as one but as a way to enhance myself.
In conclusion, I strongly consider that owners’ companies should vary the activities that their employees have to do in order to avoid feelings such as bored and uncomfortable and also to encourage workers to do their best in each activity.
People should work in what they love. In terms of conditions in work, some people prefer to work developing the same activity every day while other consider that having different activities daily is more advantageous. Both have positive and negative aspects. However, I personally believe that having a job in which workers may have different duties is the best option. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, developing unexpected tasks every day may provide people with a vast amount of knowledge because they can learn by trial and error. By doing this, people will not only more experienced but also enhance their performance at work. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I used to work in my uncle’s company at the beginning I used to do similar tasks which made me feel bored and uncomfortable and therefore my performance was questioned by some co-workers. Nevertheless, this reality changed when my uncle changed my role in the company. Every day, I did not know what to expect during the day because I started to develop numerous duties within the company; sometimes I worked in an office and others days I had to work outside. Having changed my agenda of activities, I began to feel more motivated for doing these activities and consequently, my performance was improved significantly.
Secondly, another aspect of working is that people have to enjoy all the activities they do. Breaking the routine may provide people with more challenges which involve that people will give their best efforts for achieving these goals. As I said above, when I started in my second job, the first requirement I asked my boss was to let me decide the way in which I could develop the activities that he gave me. Having accepted this suggestion, I was able to create new methods for accomplishing the required tasks which imply that my boss was satisfied with my performance despite being unconfidence in the beginning. In the same way, I did not only break my routine but also succeed with the activities required. As a result, I did not consider my job as one but as a way to enhance myself.
In conclusion, I strongly consider that owners’ companies should vary the activities that their employees have to do in order to avoid feelings such as bored and uncomfortable and also to encourage workers to do their best in each activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85024154589 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81394227698 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5743442522 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.684210526 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408979449234 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15069974635 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189785462898 0.0737576698707 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290769481008 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.235217479533 0.0645574589148 364% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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