An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Medicine has long been a profession that was taken on by some of the best and brightest that society has to offer. It is one of the longest and toughest degree fields offered and rewards those who succeed with high paying opportunities and social clout. Patients often feel that they are well equipped to understand the risks and liabilities that come with medicine but in this essay we will determine that is not the case and why patients should not have access to a record for their doctors history.
As stated previously, medicine is a complex profession involving incredible cost benefit analysis, immense and intimate knowledge of many products, and an overall competency for most modern day diseases and medicines. This knowledge is specific to this profession and isn't readily known by the layman. Although this information has started to be dispersed by companies like WebMD and television commercials. Although the access to knowledge is vast, it is often misunderstood and can result in false self diagnosis which can be tough for the medical professionals to dispel. The rise of modern day self diagnosis, which are oftentimes incorrect, is simply another example of why laypeople should not be able to assess medical issues themselves. Although a patient looking at, what they think to be, a similar medical condition there could have been unknown complications that make those two diagnoses very different. This leads into the privacy risks as well. With incredibly strict HIPA regulations it would be difficult for a lay person looking for a new doctor to know that their condition is similar enough to another patients condition to even be weighted the same.
Another issue rising from this kind of a system would be demographic based. If a doctor is located in a place that has a predisposition to have complications they may be a fine doctor but may have a lower success rate overall due to the patients they take on. This could be seen when looking at incredibly complex surgeries where a doctor might be highly praised, by their peers, for taking on extremely tough cases but have a lower success rate than one who takes on much easier clientele. Again, to a lay person, this may look like the doctor is worse overall as a percentage but may indeed by far superior if the patients were the same across the board.
Although access to information and the ability to have autonomy in ones own healthcare is important, it is also pivotal to account for the fact that most people are going to a doctor because they don't understand what is wrong with them. These people have to take the medical advice given to them and make informed decisions on that. With the help of second opinions and advice from qualified individuals I feel that most people would be able to make informed decisions on their health with the current system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, so, well, as to, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88453608247 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65543477218 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503092783505 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5866457627 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.611111111 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9444444444 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168555720205 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527580254844 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600326468964 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108799022095 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309442319429 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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