You recently had your computer fixed at a local computer store. However, you are not pleased with the service which you received.
Write a letter to the store manager.
In the letter,
-Describe the situation.
-Explain why you are dissatisfied
-Say what you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
I must tell you that i'm highly disappointed with the reputed firm like yours. The reason being the same issue that occurred in my computer which was already there before repaired by your firm. I have given for repairing work in Last week and my invoice number is 1245
I was in between of my important office work and suddenly the screen black out and computer didn't start after several efforts. I have lost all my important work, which i have to submit by end of this week to my boss. I'm really dissatisfied with the quality of work that your firm did, as it was promised to me that the issue won't happen in future as you have replaced some part of CPU. But, after use for only 2 days the problem appears again.
I want you to repair the same in utmost no time and for repairing work. As the fault is happened during the guarantee time given by you, it shouldn't cost me anything. I want you to pick up the computer from my place as soon as possible.
Your's faithfully
Bhavesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...denly the screen black out and computer didnt start after several efforts. I have los...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uter didnt start after several efforts. I have lost all my important work, which ...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... submit by end of this week to my boss. Im really dissatisfied with the quality of...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ing the guarantee time given by you, it shouldnt cost me anything. I want you to pick up...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35828877005 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21342576669 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1327238438 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197593389009 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870610147596 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629955137437 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150766792968 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628752556148 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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