In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today we have a problem that we never had before, people are dying because of too much eating and mostly that food is fast food. Fast food has become a part of our lives but it is obvious that it is not a part of a healthy diet. Maybe your friend or your family do not want you to eat but they do not take the hamburger from your hand which would make you angry, but governments do not want us to eat that food too and it tries to stop us with raising the tax on it.
Since we are free to do anything with our health, this action can be counted as something wrong. People consume fast food because of many reasons but not only they love it. There is no one exist that who does not know fast food is a threat to health. However, we still consume it.
After a long workday, we may feel a tried and we can want to eat a food without any effort.
Or we can have a limited time to eat and we can grab a burger. Since eating is a necessity, they are allowed to sell them and these foods are not luxury, raising taxes is not making a sense at all.
Instead of raising taxes on a food that creates a risk on people government should stop the spreading the unhealthy food chains with may be restricting a number of McDonald’s in a city or accessing them by pupils. Also, a better idea than raising taxes the government can stop them advertise their products.
To sum up, raising taxes on fast food is hypocrisy like the government doesn’t want us to be sick but it says if you want to become sick you need to give more money to my treasury. People will continue to buy fast food they will not give up eating it. They should be stopped without restricting their freedom and making a benefit of this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...may feel a tried and we can want to eat a food without any effort. Or we can have a l...
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Line 8, column 29, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
... at all. Instead of raising taxes on a food that creates a risk on people governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18975903614 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24742195169 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484939759036 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6588229866 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273322384171 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954622598747 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583470644088 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142282834834 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667765326462 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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