The diagram below shows the process of milk production
Given is a process illustrating how milk production are produced. The whole process includes 6 steps ranging from milking from cows to displaying milk product in supermarkets and shops.
At the beginning of the process the machine milk from crows twice on a daily basic. After that, Milk is kept cold in refrigeration storage to keep in good condition before it is delivered to Dairy by milk tankers everyday. In the factory, milk is made into milk products including cheese, cream and butter or milk is processed into milk pasteurized then packing it. At the end of milk production, finished products from milk are distributed for distributors such as supermarkets and shops to display and citizens can easy to buy milk relatived product according their preference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t is delivered to Dairy by milk tankers everyday. In the factory, milk is made into milk...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 644.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90211519633 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65873015873 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5838441304 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373939790112 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22078611524 0.103423049105 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719930102563 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33301706592 0.15604864568 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0030514312263 0.0819641961636 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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