There is less social contact between young and old.what are the reasons?what measures can be taken?
Generation gap is a one of the major heinous situation in every nation. one of the most controversial issue today relates to why there is a less social contact between young and old? In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and some measures which can help to overcome this problem.
The first thing to understand, what are the reasons of lack of social contact between young and old. Broadly speaking, the first and foremost reason is that technology is increasing day by day. Similarly, people spent more time on the gadgets which leads to lack of social contact. Apart from that, people are adopting foreign culture due to this they become more liberal and the like to spend most of their time with their age mates.Last but not least a recent survey conducted by Hindustan times in which they reveals that most of the parents gave freedom to their children and due to this they like to spent less time with the elder people.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem, given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to improve is to make awareness among parents because if parents manage time with their children and give valuable knowledge about the culture and behaviour this problem would be solved. It would be also possible to say that if parents give proper lessons about the harmful effects of gadgets and live friendly with their children this is the perfect solution.
In conclusion, there are variety of factors that led to make this problem worse. while, it may not be possible to find complete solution of this it would probably be solved if children make some effort and change their behaviour towards their parents and elder people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79037800687 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30689924085 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522336769759 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9133210979 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203472279197 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918421274693 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13456124201 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122446407227 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898098510282 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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