You recently organized an all- day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about the food
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you in reference to give a feedback on a recent event organized by my company at your hotel. I would like to let you that most of the reviews have been positive about the hotel except the food.
The participants liked the ambience of the hotel along with the customer service offered at this event however the food inclusive of various snacks and cuisines served was not well prepared as most of the participants complained that the there was some foul smell coming from the food especially the snacks.
Thus, I would suggest doing a prior check especially on the food for the company events as it does spoil the hotel's reputation in a long run due to the fact that most of the people post a review online. I hope that you will investigate the matter and take appropriate action so the same is not repeated for future events.
Yours sincerely,
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to you in reference to give...
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Line 6, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
...the company events as it does spoil the hotels reputation in a long run due to the fac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59748427673 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43371035376 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9413039906 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271062985856 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120719709651 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582956353608 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177923010627 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655409757121 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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