Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing danger. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about some teenagers allowing their canines to dangerously roam free.
I frequent the city park on weekend. However, it is plagued with adolescents who set their dogs free to run around in a wild manner. This has caused incredible discomfort and panic among senior citizens and parent with young children who visit the park.
Dogs are ferocious in nature when they are not leashed. These dogs startle older people and sometimes accidentally hurt young children playing in the park. I understand that dogs enjoy playing with other dogs but they rile the other dogs that are being walked. Furthermore, these youngsters are unapologetic and rude about the nuisance caused.
These adolescents also allow these dogs to vandalize property and liter by knocking over trash cans. Additionally, these children do not pick up after the dogs which leave the park in an unhygienic state for other.
I request you to take strict action and enforce laws restricting this behaviour in public places.
Hoping for a quick and stern action.
Yours sincerely,
Praneet K Nadar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wild manner" with adverb for "wild"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s who set their dogs free to run around in a wild manner. This has caused incredible discomfort ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1978021978 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56326778667 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686813186813 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1155510122 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7692307692 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2099963711 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635792334753 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827813748039 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848470107825 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872018861972 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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