In most of the world people are living longer what are the people causes of this is negative or positive development
Advancement in the world also change in the human lifestyle. In present scenario people lives more rather than passed in all countries in upcoming paragraph I will discuss causes and impact of this.
To initiate with Menace live are more longistic firstly ,cause of this is that changing pattern of the health facility nowadays people are focus on their fitness in addition to this treatment of each and every disease is possible with new technical ways. Secondly government also arrange awareness campaigns related to health paradigmaticaly, in the schools also focus on the medical study.
On the other side, everything has bane and bone longestic life has more negative effect in the society because old people are more interference in the family matters. moreover they are burden for their family because they are seniors so they dependent on family members also their impact on country population ultimately, if population increases then Nation cannot develop.
To conclude up,growing age person has negative impact outweighed the positive but they are also teach the young generation for their culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31818181818 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6326139086 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7745271999 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213444707603 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089588070044 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689441006099 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122896135154 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566226611975 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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