Discuss advantages and disadvantages of working for a foreign company
I'm working in the export company. I have chance to work with foreign people because of one of my responsibility for making external contracts. it is not a foreign company. However, I think to work there to have more advantages and disadvantages.
one hand is disadvantages. First of all, the language is different, it is hard to explain them understand your saying if I don't good at your language. in addition, it is hard to get promotion if I can't speak your language. Secondly, the culture is not the same in the working or eating habit. Finally, they are friendly but there are some situations to express not suitable.
On the other hand, there are more disadvantages if you work in the foreign company. I can improve your foreign language and study a lot of experiences. they have a modern working environment and friendly relationships. they help you so enthusiasm as well.
Overall, it has two side as well. if you develop your strength you can ignore disadvantages or overcome these obstacles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03973594111 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4367524322 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.6 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238210070985 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775321484369 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794485503406 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136859043092 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103728367292 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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