You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Sam,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to let you know that I moved to a new apartment. As you are aware that my earlier flat was located in the city centre, it had space issues and lacked modern amenities.
The new apartment is located on the outskirts of the city. It has three bedrooms, a kitchen, three restrooms, a living room and five balconies with a beautiful view outside. The society has all the modern facilities like jogging track, swimming pool,mini-theatre and a clubhouse with state of the art gymnasium. I love peace and tranquillity here as it situated far from the city.
I am sure you will like the place and design as I had really invested time in redesigning the interiors of the flat. Why don't you pay us a visit this weekend and see the place?. I am sure you will like it. I will prepare your favourite Chinese cuisine for lunch.
I will be waiting for the earliest response.
Warm wishes,
Nisha
- Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter Explain why you would like to do unpaid work 84
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give our opinion 73
- You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manager to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement 63
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- bank letter 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mini-theatre
...lities like jogging track, swimming pool,mini-theatre and a clubhouse with state of the art g...
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Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
... pool,mini-theatre and a clubhouse with state of the art gymnasium. I love peace and tranquillit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...esigning the interiors of the flat. Why dont you pay us a visit this weekend and see...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...favourite Chinese cuisine for lunch. I will be waiting for the earliest respon...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48066298343 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58843169373 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6302540287 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9285714286 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169309833334 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533245669418 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649558345538 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815218241304 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800945322411 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.