Some people think children are more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Discuss.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some folks believe that young kids are good at learning unfamiliar language instead of grown ups.This essay will discuss the reasons why it is easy for children whereas difficult for adults.
To begin with, curiosity level to learn new things is higher at the young age. The schooling age is perfect to study new language because at that time our brain is fully active to learn and memories easily. As we do not have to memories our mother tongue because we grow up listening those words. Similarly it is with foreign language, if introduced at a younger age there is not much difficulty in grasping. To exemplify, now a days, there are plethora of schools where it is compulsory for students to learn a different language apart from their native language.
On the other hand, many adults who have not studied foreign language at young age found it difficult to learn at this age. Firstly, learning a new language is like studying a whole new subject and at this age when there is no connection with school or college it is cumbersome. Secondly, it is very difficult to save time in your daily routine to study. Moreover, if one has learned a bit of new language, it get wasted if not practice on daily basis.
To sum up, new language learned at an early age is easier than learning at a later stage. However, it depends on person to person how much starving he has for the new thing to learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, apart from, as for, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61354581673 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44811559124 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3134044103 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123625861619 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487805536129 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457501433109 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906548295565 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491510833534 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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