The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The line graph illustrates information about how many books which were read by male and female at Public Library during the period 2011 to 2014
In overall, the number of books reading by both genders had positive trend. From 2011 to 2013, the number of books which were read by women increased gradually, around 4500 to 10000 books, while the numbers which were read by men rose slowly between 2011 and 2012 but after that, there was a significant jump in the number of books from 2012 to 2013. Following that, the number grew gradually, then reached the peak to 14000 in 2014. Utimately, there was a sudden drop in the numbers of book reading by female in this time .
General, the trends of books were read by both genders rose smoothly in the beginning but after that the number of female dropped stably while the numbers of male went up sharply.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2020-01-14 Kien Vu 78 view
2020-01-14 Kien Vu 78 view
2019-12-13 yeu192 89 view
2019-12-05 faraj27 84 view
2019-12-03 sarla 56 view

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c Library during the period 2011 to 2014 In overall, the number of books reading ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number of books which were read by women increased gradually, around 4500 to 1000...
^^
Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s of book reading by female in this time . General, the trends of books were rea...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60526315789 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15704099085 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9116813321 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412125957438 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205549301324 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104132095689 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261834431245 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950847376455 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.