Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged.
To what extent do you think is it a positive or negative development
pollution is become a burning issue nowadays, goverments have started attention to some sustainable sources like alternative sources of energy. renewable energy is a kind of energy taken from wind, solar, tidal, nuclear, water power, so it guarantees a boundless supply of energy for future generation. while fossil fuels which originated from nature and taking millions of years to be formed is running out, alternative energy is available to use. moreover, renewable energy is much cleaner energy than fossil fuels, because it can generate eclectricity with no associated air pollution emissions. therefore using clean energy is contribute to the protection of the environment and slowing down the process of global warming, in order to obtain fossil fuels, human must exploit oil. coal.... and that activities probably destroy animals's habitat. for examble, if oil exploitation takes place, oil spill will occur which have detrimental effects on natural creature
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pollution
pollution is become a burning issue nowadays, gov...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Renewable
...ces like alternative sources of energy. renewable energy is a kind of energy taken from w...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...supply of energy for future generation. while fossil fuels which originated from natu...
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Line 1, column 450, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...alternative energy is available to use. moreover, renewable energy is much cleaner energ...
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Line 1, column 600, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... no associated air pollution emissions. therefore using clean energy is contribute to the...
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Line 1, column 600, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
... no associated air pollution emissions. therefore using clean energy is contribute to the...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...ssions. therefore using clean energy is contribute to the protection of the environment an...
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Suggestion: Coal
...n fossil fuels, human must exploit oil. coal.... and that activities probably destro...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ties probably destroy animalss habitat. for examble, if oil exploitation takes plac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77746029932 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.734693877551 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1190401832 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201173764787 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817382973437 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693874590662 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201173764787 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.