You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss.
In your letter
• Describe the job you are applying for
• Say what you want to be included in the reference letter
• Request that your former boss send you the letter by the end of the week
Dear Mrs Jameson,
I am writing to ask whether you would kindly write me a reference letter. The job I am applying for relates to the banking industry. More specifically, I hope to work as the account reconciliation officer for the team.
Let me explain the content of the reference letter in more details. you could write about amiable and highly meticulous nature, for example. Also, you would write about how I am an effective team player. Furthermore, please include my ability to work under pressure with minimal supervision.In addition, it would be fantastic if you could say I have excellent presentation skills as well.
would you be able to deliver the letter by the end of the week? I have a tight deadline for the job application as the job begins in less than two weeks. it would mean a lot to me if you could write the letter as soon as you possibly can.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
ife Ade
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...earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, ife Ade
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65497076023 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77153499791 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0496378468 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423595080745 0.216113520407 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146298628704 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667597919335 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251023170057 0.12726935374 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753629050808 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.