Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected.
Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued by some proportion of masses, protection of all the wild animals must be necessary whilst other ones hold a conviction that not all but some want protection. In my opinion, it is not an eminent way to put all the rare animals in cages, so that still need to protect those animals who are in the verge of extinction.
To embark on, for the setup of preservation of endangered animals, it would be demanding huge amount of money. Consequently, it can cause adverse effects on nation's budget and lead to plummeted economic growth. Moreover, as a result, the population of such species will also have upsurged and the overcrowded population will exploit the lifestyle of human beings. According to a survey it concludes that, the overpopulation of animals will increase the consumption of habitat areas and food by 30%.
On the other hand, it is burning issue that most of the wild animals are in the verge of extinction. So that, it is imperative to save them to stable the balance of food chain. To exemplify that, if some species will endangered then it could effects the natural process of food chain and disturb the ecosystem. Furthermore, plethora of animals are used in medical premises. Most of the medicines will have been made by bone and skin of such beings. For instance, the blood of snakes are used for the ailments of snake bites.
To put the final lid on, animals are the beautiful creation of nature. As the protection of them is mandatory but not required for all wild species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73484848485 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70418468012 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3545453591 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188310585954 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617125411436 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060358188278 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123404197335 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656461495531 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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