More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
many people today consider to wear trendy clothes as a significant part of their life. many argue whether this fashion has a positive or negative impact on the overall society. In my view, choosing your attire is like showcasing one's art and this trend actually boost the economy therefore i feel it has more pros than cons.
one reason many people wear new and update fashion is that they want to display the artistic side of themselves. By wearing their chosen clothes they want to show about their personality and feel comfortable among the people they are meeting. Which is a very good practice and it relieves the stress. Additionally, fashionable clothes are costly and this trend actually boost the economy. people buy more and more such stuff and demand is created in the market. consequently businesses and jobs grows in the area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, if, so, therefore, i feel, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 143.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8951048951 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49541611155 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657342657343 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1285312463 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7777777778 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341044062952 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115742702125 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717169619261 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258323035816 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153886492865 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.