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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to express my interest in applying in the volunteering activity in the super-ball tournament where will be held in Doha next month.
I have several experiences in similar previous events, and I am more interested to be responsible for distributing the refreshments and water to all visitors. when I saw the advert of the event on the newspaper, I realized that this activity will be essential as the event is in Summer. it will be my pleasure to help all people who are visiting our city as well for first time.
The event schedule starts at night in the weekend; therefore, I won`t be having any other commitment. I will arrange several booths for refreshments which cover the whole area of the event. some leaflets will be also arranged to list down all varieties of refreshment; hence, all visitor can choose their preferable refreshment.
There are multiple exits and entrances in the location of the events which can create confusion to the visitors when they enter or leave. I would therefore suggest that we arrange some booklet maps to be as a guidance to them. it would be better to distribute it along with the tickets.
I look forward to receiving your acceptance on my application.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...refreshments and water to all visitors. when I saw the advert of the event on the ne...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...be essential as the event is in Summer. it will be my pleasure to help all people ...
^^
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...hich cover the whole area of the event. some leaflets will be also arranged to list ...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...oklet maps to be as a guidance to them. it would be better to distribute it along ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83410138249 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88207495551 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0609226046 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131334345541 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505161184666 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288163851954 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659691073234 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027660772043 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.