Talk about your favorite school subject. You should say:
- which subject it is
- when you study it at school
- what it is special about
and explain why you like it.
I learn many subjects at school such as maths, chemistry, physics, etc, but maybe I enjoy chemistry best. I study it 3 times a week. To high school students, maybe chemistry is very hard to learn or to understand. Sometimes I also feel like that. It includes a lot of knowledge, and the only way to study it well learning by heart, you have to learn all formula, all reaction, each color when the reaction happen, etc. However, it also has something interesting, I am glad when I learn practical lessons, I can do something which I has studied. When the reaction succeeds, it makes me extremely happy and it give my some strange feelings maybe satisfied,.. and when it succeeds it will have some colors which are beautiful. I love chemistry much because it is interesting, makes me happy or my teacher is funny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
I learn many subjects at school such as ...
^^
Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...cal lessons, I can do something which I has studied. When the reaction succeeds, it...
^^^
Line 1, column 611, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...eds, it makes me extremely happy and it give my some strange feelings maybe satisfie...
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Line 1, column 656, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...my some strange feelings maybe satisfied,.. and when it succeeds it will have some...
^^
Line 1, column 657, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...y some strange feelings maybe satisfied,.. and when it succeeds it will have some ...
^^
Line 1, column 660, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ome strange feelings maybe satisfied,.. and when it succeeds it will have some colo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 667.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 145.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73521101752 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9360707662 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1111111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154645970169 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057302261895 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360053552329 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154645970169 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.