nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Currently, it is being discussed why there is a growing amount of rubbish produced by people. At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty as to the causes of this problem, and how the government might resolve it. In this essay I will examine the issue and seek some possible solutions.
To begin with, in regard to causes, it is undeniable that bad living habits of the public has given rise to the everyday garbage in ascending numbers. For example, people are addicted to using plastic bags to pack their goods when shopping and then carelessly throw them away when they return home. In addition, frequent industrial activities lead to a growing amount of industrial waste. In order to meet the greater need for goods, factories have to operate all day long, which means that they are producing garbage such as discarded raw material while manufacturing.
On the other hand, as to solutions, the government should encourage the public to apply eco-friendly packets, like degradable ones, which may be decomposed by bacteria within a short time. Thus, we are unnecessarily concerned that there will be larger amount of rubbish in the environment. For another, the government ought to draw up and enact harsh laws to force the factories to advance their production devices. With the state-of-the-art machines, workers can make full use of raw material and there will be less industrial waste.
To summarize, there is no doubt that plenty of industrial activities and bad living habits play significant roles in the rubbish augmenting. At the same time, however, to combat this problem, governments should urge companies to upgrade their production facilities and require the public to employ eco-friendly bags.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, in regard to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14590747331 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82312519037 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2517572687 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140869419227 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531244733339 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061421595365 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890489914406 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496926014213 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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