: The graph below give information about total oil use if four main consumers from 2009 to 2030
This graph gives us some information about how much has been used oil by major consumers in the different places include US, Western Europe and Japan, China and Middle east from 2009-2030.
As you see in 2009-2015 in US’s graph the oil consumption hasn’t changed in fact, after 2015 the decline of consumption shows that US has focused on consumption of this nature source and will predict that utilize oil will be minimal in 2030.Indeed the US has reach out to this point after 2015.
As an illustration, the Western Europe and Japan more success in declaration of consumption has had declined and this prove that western Europe and Japan has had solution for exorbitant consumption of oil and they predict that oil consumption will be as low as possible in 2030. Although this process has since 2009 has been started so far.
But in China since after 2025 we illustrate the consumption has raise and China has destructive way for reducing oil after 2025.
In comparison with others above countries the consumption oil in Middle East is alarming, because the Middle East’s chart can be interpreted as follows that consumption oil increase and that would be concern.
Obviously, oil is a nature source and all countries have to correct consummate, we will have a crisis of reducing of nature sources especially oil in the world and this will concern for future generations so correct management of this crisis can solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04115226337 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74663536453 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514403292181 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8414926803 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.0 118.986275619 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7142857143 23.4991977007 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178576136972 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942628969872 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103118265969 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104443992824 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108720593118 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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