a nation should require all of its students to study the same national cirriculum until they enter college.
write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. in developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I agree to the given topic which says that nation should require all of its students or colleagues to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. BEing a very general and obvious concern it becomes necessary for schools to make their students aware of the nation they have been born to.
Firstly, imagine if children are oblivious to the understanding and working of their nation. Would not it be a shame if they do not know anything about their nation . To avoid such situations nation should make sure that schools are teaching their students about their nation and also making them aware about the beautiful place they have been bought up to. Not only it increases their knowledge but also they get to know about their nation. For instance if we talk about India, students should be aware about the history behind it, about the freedom fighters who fought till their last breath just so we can get independence and become an autonomous country.
Furthermore, students must also get to know the detailed version of the past happenings in our nation. How countries got divided ? How all people are same yet have different religions ; which by the way makes all the difference in today's world. They must also know about our soldiers who fight day and night with our enemies just so we can live peacefully and pursue our dreams to become the way we want to.
Language is something which differentiates two places from each other. Every country has its own language , or you can say mother tongue. My country's mother tongue is hindi which is different from every other country. In China people speak Chinese, in Dubai they speak Arabic . Before getting into college students must be taught about all these things about their nation which will thereby increase their knowledge about the same .
I totally agree with the fact that nation should keep a check on schools , for are they teaching their students about the same natinal cirriculum or not but, if we see it in a different way , they should also be taught about different nations and their history which will help them broaden their mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for instance, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84254143646 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31825259752 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9459834933 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278100144923 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102617605058 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104100939628 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196478435772 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101738016804 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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